Saturday, November 8, 2014

Snow White and Rose Red

This is a story I wrote for an advanced fiction class a couple of years ago. The characters are fictional, but the setting is the four acres of land I grew up on, and Danni's personality is a lot like mine was when I was a kid.


Snow White and Rose Red
            Sweat glued Danni’s shirt to her back and plastered tendrils of her dark hair that had escaped her ponytail to the sides of her face, and her feet slid around inside her dad’s rubber boots, which came up all the way to her knees. It was as hot and sticky as any other June day in Texas, but it would take more than hundred degree weather to get Danni back inside the house, especially now. Jason was over again.
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            “I did it! I did it! I beat you!” Danni cried happily from the highest sturdy branch in the biggest post oak in the back yard.
            “No fair!” said Laura from a couple of branches down. “I’ve seen you practicing during my riding lessons. You’ve gone and turned into a little spider monkey on me.”
            “It still counts,” said Danni. “You beat me every other time we raced.”
            “Yes I did,” said Laura, at last reaching Danni’s branch. The two sisters sat side-by-side, looking out at the forested landscape of their country neighborhood.
            “Well, you know what this means,” said Laura when they had both recovered from the climb. “You won, so you get to pick the game today.”
            Danni screwed up her face in concentration. “We played Narnia last time, Little House on the Prairie the time before, so…fairy princesses,” she decided.
            Laura grinned. “I’ll go get Dad’s ski poles.”
            “I’ll wait by the Fairy Mound!” said Danni. “The evil Sidhe of the Unseelie Court are no match for us!”
--
            Laura was still inside the house, but if she didn’t want to go exploring, Danni would just do it by herself. It was better this way, really. If Laura wasn’t going, then Danni was free to wear the big boots, which were best for wading in the creek. And there were plenty of games she could play by herself. It would be just as much fun.
            Danni wiped a hand up her forehead, thinking the sweat would make her bangs lie nice and flat against the top of her head, but it really only made them stick straight up in the air. Upon reaching the gate in the fence that separated the backyard from the horse pasture, she bent down and slipped between the rusty horizontal bars, her ten-year-old frame small enough to fit even with the backpack she wore doubling the width of her torso.
            On her way to the creek, Danni passed the Fairy Mound, a mysterious heap of earth jutting up about eight feet above the rest of the flattest part of the pasture that had been there as long as she and Laura could remember, two battered ski poles they used as swords lying discarded in the weeds that grew at the base of it. She passed the dilapidated shed with the archery target tacked to the back, several arrows sticking out of it at random from the last time she’d pretended to be Merida at the highland games. She passed the fence line where the dewberries grew every May, then the one with the nightshade bush at the end of it. She wrinkled her nose at the memory of the burnt toast milkshake cure she’d had to drink after showing her mom the little red berries she’d been eating one day when she was seven. She passed the small, moss-covered pond where she and Laura dug for old bottles buried in the mud and looked for crawdads under rocks.
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            “Laura, Laura, look at this crawdad I caught!” said Danni excitedly as she burst into the kitchen through the sliding glass back door.
            “Ah-ah-ah,” said her mom, not looking up from the onions she was chopping. “Boots.”
            Danni rolled her eyes but retreated onto the patio long enough to kick her boots off, before dashing back inside, into the living room, around the corner into the hall, and into Laura’s room, where she stopped dead in her tracks, her eyes wide.
            “Is this your sister?” asked a boy Danni had never seen before. He was big, had dark hair, and wore a jacket with a large letter C over the left breast.
            “Yeah, that’s Danni,” said Laura. The two teenagers were sitting on Laura’s bed and the radio was tuned to a pop station Danni hated.
            “Who are you?” said Danni, still staring at the intruder.
            “This is Jason,” said Laura. She sounded nervous, which made Danni look at her instead, which reminded her why she had come into her room.
            “Look,” she said, holding up the slimy gray freshwater crustacean for her sister to see, its tail, antennae, and legs all writhing in midair in a futile attempt to escape.
            “Gross! What the hell is that?” said Jason, recoiling and covering his nose. “It smells like dead fish!”
            “It’s a crawdad,” said Danni, glaring at him. “And you’re not supposed to say the h-word.” She looked at Laura again. “Isn’t it cool?” she asked, holding it out farther so Laura could get a better look. “I think it’s even bigger than the one you caught last week.”
            “You catch those things?” Jason demanded of Laura, sounding appalled.
            Laura’s eyes darted from Jason to Danni and back again.
            “Of course she d—” Danni began, but Laura interrupted her.
            “No,” she scoffed. “Why would I want to do that?”
            “But—” Danni tried to protest.
            “Get that thing out of here, Danni. Why do you always have to bother me with your stupid kid stuff?”
--
            The tall grass gave way to stubbly clumps left over from the horses’ repeated grazing, and then finally to muddy earth that sucked at the enormous boots as Danni reached the edge of the creek. She squatted down right at the bank. After a few seconds, she spotted what she was looking for. The tadpoles she’d found the other day were still there. She slipped one arm free of her backpack’s straps and twisted it around so that she could reach the zipper, then retrieved the Mason jar she’d snitched out of the pantry from where it had lodged itself between several dog-eared library books. Slowly, she dipped the mouth of the jar beneath the surface of the water and waited. At first, the tadpoles scattered at the disturbance of their habitat, but eventually they calmed down, and one of them swam straight into the jar.
            Grinning in triumph, Danni pulled the jar back out of the water and held it up so she could see the tadpole darting around the edges.
--
            “Laura, look what I found in the creek!” said Danni proudly, sticking the Mason jar in her big sister’s face.
            “Ew, get that thing away from me!” Laura shrieked, throwing herself sideways so hard that she sent her textbooks and notebook paper flying off the table and onto the kitchen floor. “MOM!”
            Danni stuck out her tongue and hurried away with the Mason jar cradled safely against her chest. She went back outside and carried her treasure over to the fort she’d made between the largest two fig trees, where a Rubbermaid bucket two-thirds full of scummy water from the pond sat awaiting its new resident. She tipped the jar into the bucket and watched the tadpole swim around.
--
            Danni turned the final page of Mockingjay and sat in numb silence for a few minutes. She’d stolen it from the bookcase in her parents’ room two days before (it had been placed next to the last three Harry Potter books on the “PG-13” shelf) and sneaked it out to her hideout between the fig trees, safe from the dew and the humidity in a gallon-sized Ziploc bag, and she’d spent most of her time since then curled up with it under the dome of leaves and branches next to her tadpole’s bucket.
            As she closed the book, she thought back to all those times she and Laura had played Katniss and Prim a few years ago. She hadn’t read any of the books yet back then—only after her tenth birthday that spring had she been allowed to read the first two. No, back then, Laura had only told her enough about Everdeen sisters for them to pretend. But when the third book came out, Laura had suddenly declared that game off-limits. Danni had asked her why, but Laura had refused to say.
            Now she knew. The contrast between Laura not wanting to play a game with her because she cared about her and not wanting to play a game with her because she was too preoccupied with her own life sent a sharp ache up Danni’s throat.
--
            “I’m not playing, Danni!” Laura shouted, slamming her bedroom door closed.
            “But there’s no point planting a secret garden if there’s no Mrs. Medlock to take away the key and lock me in my room so I have to escape through a tapestry!” said Danni, pounding on the door. She tried the knob, but Laura had already locked it.
            “We don’t have tapestries!”
            “Yeah, but we have curtains. If you just help me take the screen off my window, I can escape through that.”
            “No.”
            “Come on! You won’t be Miss Minchin so I can pretend the wood playhouse is my secret Indian palace, and you won’t be Jadis so I can defend Narnia, and you won’t even be Hattie, even though you like bossing me around so much that you’d be a perfect Hattie!”
            “But you never do what I tell you, so would you really want to be Ella if I’m Hattie?”
            “Yes, because then at least you’d be playing with me!”           
            I’m not playing.”
            “But Laaaaaura!”
            “Fine!”
            Danni blinked. “Really?”
            “Yeah. We’ll play Ramona and Beezus. ‘Ramona, you’re a pest! Go away!’ There. Game over.”
            “Ugh! That doesn’t count!”
            “Just leave me alone, Danni,” said Laura. “Not all of us are ten with no summer homework to do.”
            “You liar, you’re not doing homework! I saw you painting your nails and listening to your iPod just now!”
            “Just go check on your stupid tadpole and leave me alone!”
            “I hope Jason dumps you! Ever since you met him, you’ve turned completely boring and mean!”
            A sudden blare of pop music from inside the room ended the conversation, and Danni stormed away. She decided that she was going to be Ella anyway and proceeded to do exactly as Laura had said; she went outside to check on the tadpole. It had been a month since she caught it, and despite Laura’s taunts that it would die and her mom’s insistence that she put it back in the creek (which her dad had overruled with a long-winded speech about how this was the perfect way for Danni to learn responsibility), it was still alive. It had doubled in size and grown back legs. When she looked close enough, she thought she could see the stubby beginnings of front legs too.
--
            It was August. Danni’s knees were scabbed and scraped from all the times she’d fallen down while rollerblading up and down the neighborhood’s roughly paved streets, her skin was tan, her hair was several shades lighter, her hands were callused from the rough bark of the post oaks she climbed every day, and the soles of her feet were as tough as leather from running barefoot over every terrain their property offered, from the sticker patches around the house to the gravel driveways. The arrows sticking out of the target on the back of the shed were closer to the bullseye than they had been in June, and the creek and pond were both about two feet lower after a month with only one rainstorm.
            School would start in a week. Laura would be a junior in high school and Danni would be in the fifth grade, attending the intermediate school instead of the elementary school she’d attended since kindergarten. But that was a whole week away, so Danni didn’t have to worry about it yet. With the house invaded all too often by Jason these days, Danni practically lived in the backyard and pasture now, where her adventures continued to be solo. This particular afternoon saw her curled up in one of the post oaks—this one’s split trunk had a perfectly Danni-sized cradle about ten feet off the ground where the large branches diverged—, her nose buried in the newest Artemis Fowl book. If things were the way they should have been, Laura would be reading it aloud to her, complete with voices and gestures, like she had done with all the others in the series.
--
            “Mom, can’t you tell Laura she’s not allowed to invite Jason over anymore?” said Danni, her arms stuck straight out on either side of her while her mom adjusted the pins holding her half-finished Merida dress in place. They were getting a head start on Halloween costume preparations. She might not have the character’s wild red hair, but hers would be the only home-made, authentic-looking dress, and she would definitely be the only Merida of the girls at her school who could ride a horse or handle a bow and arrow.
            “Your dad and I would much rather she invite him over here as often as she wants during the daytime than for him to take her somewhere else.” She made a twirling motion with her finger, and Danni turned around to give her access to the back of the dress.
            “But Laura’s been so mean ever since he started coming over!” Danni protested.
            Her mom chuckled. “Laura’s sixteen,” she said, tugging here and there at the forest green fabric. “It’s a difficult time for her.”
            “What do you mean?”
            “It’s the same way for every teenager. They get old enough to drive and they suddenly think they have the whole world figured out, but in reality the only difference between them and little kids is hormones. It’s a heavy burden to think you know everything when you really don’t know much at all.”
            Danni frowned. “Are you sure an evil changeling didn’t just swap places with her?”
            “Yes. She’s just a normal teenager.”
            “Well then I’m not going to be a normal teenager.”
            Her mom laughed again. “I’ll remember you said that.”
--
            Suddenly uninterested in reading, Danni tucked the book into the crook of a slightly higher branch and swung down from her perch, landing like a cat on the grass, then springing upright and skipping over to where the horses were grazing next to the fence. She wasn’t allowed to ride them when her dad wasn’t home, not even if Laura (or Changeling Laura, as Danni had started calling her in her head lately) was riding. She clicked her tongue and held out her hand. Wiley, the stout, dark-coated mustang her dad had bought at an auction, was the first to perk up his ears and amble over.
            “Hey there, boy,” said Danni, patting Wiley on the nose. He snorted and she jumped back to avoid the spray of black mucous from his nostrils, but some of it still got on her shirt. With a noise of disgust, she walked away towards the fig trees, picking off the little bits of snot and wiping them on the grass as she went. When she reached the spot where the biggest fig trees met, she dropped to her knees and crawled under the crisscrossing branches that hid her fort from view. The bucket was still safely tucked right at the base of one of the trees. When she’d checked yesterday, the almost-frog had been climbing up on top of the little muddy bank at the edge of the bucket, all four legs fully developed and its tail mostly gone. As it had grown, it had gone from a dull brown to the most beautiful shade of green Danni had ever seen. About a week ago, she’d finally given it a name: Emmie, short for Emerald.
            She frowned. She couldn’t find the frog anywhere in the bucket. She poked around the moss around to see if Emmie was hiding in a corner somewhere, but found nothing. With a flood of anger, she realized what must have happened. A minute later, she was back inside the house and bursting into Laura’s room. “What did you do with Emmie, Laura?” she demanded. But then she froze. Laura was lying on her bed, her face buried in her arms, her shoulders shaking. “Laura?”
            Laura lifted her head and looked over at her. Her face was streaked with tears. “Go away, Danni,” she said. She didn’t say it in the snappish, rude voice she always used when she was being Changeling Laura, she just sounded miserable.
            “What happened?” said Danni, moving closer to the bed.
            “Jason dumped me, okay?” Laura bit out angrily, before giving herself over to a fresh wave of sobs.
            Danni watched her for a minute. She’d been hoping this would happen since practically the moment she met Jason, but somehow she felt no triumph. He was a big dumb jerk who had turned Laura into a completely different person, but maybe she really had cared about him. Danni climbed up on the bed and wrapped her arms around Laura’s shaking shoulders.
            “Ew, what’s on your hands?” said Laura, jumping up into a sitting position and scooting away.
            “Oh,” said Danni, looking at her hands. “It’s moss from Emmie’s bucket. She’s not there.”
            Laura looked at Danni, then wiped her eyes. “She’s a frog now,” she said. “She probably jumped away.”
            Danni wilted slightly where she sat. “I didn’t think about that.”
            “Or,” said Laura slowly, “maybe one of the Unseelies kidnapped her.”
            Danni turned to stare at her sister so fast that she cricked her neck.
            “We should go rescue her,” said Laura.
            “Really?” said Danni.
            “Yeah,” said Laura.
            Danni looked at the smeared makeup on her sister’s face. She had to do something to make sure this wasn’t just a one-time thing. A compromise. “After we save Emmie,” she said hesitantly, “if I let you paint my nails, will you play Narnia with me? You can be Susan if you want, like before. I won’t make you be Jadis.”
            Laura offered her a shaky smile. “Okay.”

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